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Text from EnzoRinaldi - English

  • The road was long and unpredictable

    • I never thought to be able to reach my objective to become agonist in the skating and to pass in the group of the best girls in the company, but the last year i made the best owen, i made a lotto of sacrifice and i am improved so much.
    • To the last summer my mother got a message who said i passed to the next livel and I’ll could to go in the group of the oldest girls.
    • For me il was a very big satisfaction.
    • The road tested my determination , but it also showed me that all I need to do is believe in myself and I can to go anywhere

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • I never thought to be able to reach my objective to become agonist in the skating and to pass in the group of the best girls in the company, but the last year i made the best owen, i made a lotto of sacrifice and i am improved so much.
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    • I never thought toI would be able to reach my objective to become agonist in the top skatinger and to pass join the group of the best girls in the company, but the last year i made the best owen,a lot of progress. i made a lotto of sacrifices and i am improved so much.
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  • Sentence 2
    • To the last summer my mother got a message who said i passed to the next livel and I’ll could to go in the group of the oldest girls.
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    • To the lLast summer, my mother got a message who saidsaying i passed to the next lievel, and I’ll could to go join the group of the oldestr girls.
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  • Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • The road tested my determination , but it also showed me that all I need to do is believe in myself and I can to go anywhere
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    • The road tested my determination , but it also showed me that all I need to do is believe in myself, and I can to go anywhere.
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